Audience Research + Focus group
For our rough cut, we asked our class mates for feedback. The responded honest gestures and constructive criticism in order to improve our final film.
We agree with our classmates as there comments were true. There are a few things that need to be sorted out in our film.
The main problems of the film:
- The film length
- The main plot
- Scenes when characters were walking
- The weather
- Speech
Film length
For our final piece, we needed our film to be under 3 minutes. Our rough cut was around 4-5 minutes so we needed to make it shorter. We are going to reduce the size of the film by editing the shots by cutting scenes as well as getting rid of unnecessary clips.
They said the film was way too long.
They said the film was way too long.
The main plot
Our class mates thought it was very difficult for them to actually get the gist of what is going on. We will re do some scenes and them into film including the psychiatrist scene, one of the main scenes to the film, as it explains a lot of the plot.
They said that they found finding the plot of the film too difficult.
Characters' speech + sound
we need the speech of the characters to be clear and understandable for the audience in order for them to find out what is happening in the film. We need to make sure that the sound is just right as this will help our audience hear the voices of the characters.
They said that the characters were not speaking loud enough
Weather
As we were filming in february, the weather wasn't too good. The wind interrupted many scenes in the park. We are going to redo a lot of the scenes where and when it is not raining and there is not too much wind.
They said the wind was effecting the sound.
They said the wind was effecting the sound.







